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Soda and Shaded Glasses by ~jacenx:iconjacenx:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Visual Poetry

©2005-2009 ~jacenx
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This is a poem that I wrote at 2a.m. in the morning and I showed it to a friend and explained it to her and she liked it a lot. So then I asked her to do a background for it-god knows I can't draw XD and I love the art for it more than the poem itself. SO I dedicate this poem to my soda- Vash's Angel A.K.A. she whom draws L....XD for being my best friend and my soda in times of need lol (that sounds funny) and to my glasses- Number 1 Target. A.K.A. Juice Box lol.


Thanx a bunch both of you, and VA- for the art work on this, it is the SHIZZIT.

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*vashs-angel Jul 13, 2005, 1:42:46 AM
Hahaha! Yes, I am she whom draws L! :mwahaha: :D That was awesome. Anyways, yes, I love this poem. It's very nicely written.. my favorite lines are "When all I got left is troubles in masses, I still have soda and shaded glasses". It's so... well it's pretty. I don't know the words for it XD It reminds me of the lines of a song that would probably come right before this cool guitar solo :D In any case, you're very welcome for the background ^^ The poem is pretty freakin' awesome, after all! Also, I like the name Soda :D That's pretty cool. XD

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L.... .::.. ..::.
O.. :::-VA-:::
V... `:::::::`
E....... `:`~Tara

Commissions Available <3
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~MrPants3000 Jul 13, 2005, 6:30:45 AM
Yar I need a nick name, how about..Gaara XD any ways its so cool how poetry and song writeing comes to you. I suck at bolth equally XD
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~kevkevharhar Jul 13, 2005, 7:15:41 AM
XD i think Joe'd like this one...wait..its 8:14 and Tim sent comment at 7:30! MUST SIGN ON MSN!
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~jacenx Jul 13, 2005, 1:19:22 PM
lol, I hope he does.
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~jacenx Jul 13, 2005, 1:24:01 PM
thanx, but at least you can draw lol.
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~jacenx Jul 13, 2005, 1:31:12 PM
Justice will prevail, XD. I think I will start working on more words for this, inorder to make it a song, but-you must sing it, as I will be playing the guitar for it, and then we can tape it and then do it again with me playing the bass. That would be cool.
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*vashs-angel Jul 13, 2005, 1:40:33 PM
it would be awesome :D And yes, justice WILL prevail! XD

--
L.... .::.. ..::.
O.. :::-VA-:::
V... `:::::::`
E....... `:`~Tara

Commissions Available <3
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~jacenx Jul 13, 2005, 1:46:19 PM
hahahaha. I think I already have the perfect guitar and bass lines for it. XD
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~MrPants3000 Jul 13, 2005, 2:45:28 PM
Thanks but you could probably draw to with some practice. I don't think I've ever seen you draw anything.
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